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Spike and Rarity Story Pt1

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Spike and Rarity Story
It was the night of the gala, the one that didn't go so well for the ponies.
YOUR GOING TO LOVE ME!!!
"How could I have been so cruel?" asked Fluttershy in an almost crying voice.
"I forgive you, child. Everypony loses their tempers at some point or another." said the princess in a happy reassuring voice. "I know that you may not have been able to socialize with the animals, but there is one animal who would like to see you."
"Philomena! " screamed Fluttershy in a happy tone.
"Im glad that everything ended on a positive note tonight, but ah still wish that ah coulda sold some of those apple treats to help out mah family." sighed AppleJack.
"I would be more than willing to pay for some of those delicious treats of yours, AppleJack. I hope this will suffice..." said Princess Celestia.  
"Oh thank ya kindly, Princess! This here should be 'nuff to at least fix our old roof!
"Wow Rainbow Dash, did you even get to talk to the Wonder bolts at all?" asked Fluttershy
"Yeah, but only for like a few seconds. Everypony else kept hogging them up! I guess It'll be a while before I see them again." sighed Rainbow Dash.
" Oh, Rainbow Dash, I'm glad you said something! I almost forgot, the Wonderbolts  asked me to give this to you. It's a free ticket to their next air show and they said that they would appreciate it of you came to see them after the show..." said Princess Celestia.
"OMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSH!!!" Screamed RainbowDash.
"So Princess, are you sure it's ok for you to be here?" asked Twilight Sparkle.
"Yeah, shouldn't you be back at the gala helping greet the ponies that are coming?" asked Spike.
"Don't worry you two, I've taken care of everything. I was able to get the animals out of the ballroom rather quickly and it seems we were full at the gala so I didn't need to greet at the palace entrance anymore. I just told some of my guards that I'd be out for a while until midnight so they will tend to the gala for me." replied Princess Celestia.
" I'm glad to hear that. You have no idea how much I have wanted to talk to you tonight! We have alot to catch up on..." said Twilight Sparkle.
"Don't worry Pinkie, the ponies at the gala may have been boring, but we're all still here for you." Spike said to pinkie.
" That's right Darling. Just because the party is over doesn't mean you still can't have fun spending time with us." added Rarity.
"The party over? What are you guys talking about?! The party's just getting started!!" yelled Pinkie.
"Hit it Pony Joe! C'MON EVERYPONY, LETS PARTY!!" yelled Pinkie.
It delights me that to know the everyone is happy now even after we all had such a terrible night at the Gala... Rarity thought.
But somehow I just can't get my mind off Prince Blueblood. Here all this time I thought we were destined to be together and now my hopes and dreams have been shattered...
I guess this means that I will be dancing all by myself, unaccompanied by a fine gentleman like I was expecting...
"May I have this dance Rarity?" asked Spike, who was blushing a little.
Then again, I could be wrong, thought Rarity, who was also blushing a little.
"So Rarity, may I?" holding out his hand.
"Yes, of course Spike. I'd love to." as she put her hoof on his hand.
Then Spike and Rarity joined the others and danced.
----
When the party was finally over, everypony was heading for home.
"Bye Rainbow Dash, see you later!" said Spike
"See ya  Spike, good luck with youknowwho;)"
"Thanks!" replied Spike.
After saying bye to the rest of the ponies, only 3 remained, the Princess, Twilight, and Rarity.
Just as Spike was about to say goodbye to Rarity, she interrupted.
"Um, Spike, would you mind walking me home?"
"Of course milady! Anything for the more gorgeous pony in Ponyville." replied Spike.
"Oh Spike, you're such a gentleman." said Rarity, still blushing a little.
As they were heading out the door, Twilight followed and gave Spike a reassuring wink.
As Spike and Rarity were walking, Spike had many thoughts going on in his head right now.
I can't believe this is happening, me, with her, this day turned out to be the best day ever!
At the same time, Rarity was also thinking.
Spike certainly is special, a lot better than that Prince Blueblood who wasn't romantic at all. I'd rather be here with Spike. But I have this weird feeling about Spike being more than my friend and helper.
Before both of them knew it, they were already at Rarity's.
"Here we are milady" Spike said in front of Rarity's home.
"Oh thank you Spike, for everything." replied Rarity.
"Oh it's nothing, I'd do anything for you" said Spike.
"Oh Spike, you're such a gentleman. So I guess I'll see you later." Rarity said about to walking inside.
Then, all of a sudden, she stopped, turned around, and gave Spike a kiss on the cheek.
"Goodnight Spike" said Rarity.
Spike was speechless, until he muttered" Goodnight Rarity my love. "
Then Spike turned around and went home. Rubbing the spot on his cheek were Rarity kissed him.
"This, really was the best night ever" Spike said as he headed for home.
----
When he got home, he noticed that there was still a light on in Twilights room. When he went inside, Twilight was in her bed reading a book, then looked over at Spike.
"How did it go with Rarity?" Twilight asked.
"It was, the best night of my life." replied Spike. Then, Spike walked over to his bed, and fell asleep into one his most peaceful sleeps ever. "Rarity"
"I'm glad that Spike is happy, I just wonder what Rarity thinks of this." Whispered Twilight to herself.
----
At Rarity's.
I don't know why I'm thinking about Spike so much, he's just my friend. But, he still makes me happy. Then suddenly, Sweetie Belle woke up.
"Whu, what's on your mind sis?" she asked.
"Oh, nothing, just go to sleep." replied Rarity.
Then Rarity got comfortable in her bed and went to sleep."Spike" is all she said.
----
The next morning, Spike awoke to find that Twilight was doing her usual study time as she always does early in the morning. Spike went downstairs to greet Twilight.
"Morning Twilight!" he said.
"Oh you're up!" Twilight said with a smile.
"Yeah, I'm up. So Twilight, what do I have to do today?" asked Spike.
"Nothing, you deserve a day off. Besides, Rarity called and told me she wanted to see you. " she replied.
"Oh, me? I wonder what she has to say." thought Spike.
"Well, it sounds like she really wants to see you. She told me that last night was one of the best nights ever. But I have one question, what happened?" asked Twilight.
"Oh, well, I walked her home, and she was about to walk inside her house, then she turned around and kissed right here." said Spike, pointing at his cheek.
"Awww, that's so sweet. Anyways, you better get a move on, Rarity will be expecting you." noted Twilight.
"Ok, see ya later!" said Spike as he went out the door.
----
On the way to Rarity's, Spike had this weird feeling. Like someone was watching him.
Then, out of nowhere, Applebloom, Scootaloo, and Sweetie Belle were standing right  in front of Spike.
"Hello there Spike, where are you going today?" they asked.
"Um, hello girls, I was just umm heading to um"
"To see my sister" said Sweetie Belle with a big grin on her face.
"How did you know?" asked Spike.
"Well, I am Rarity's sister. I also heard her come home last night, I also heard her say your name before she fell asleep. She was talking about you all morning.
"She was?" said Spike in a confused sort of way.
"Yeah, and she sent us to come looking for you. She wanted to make sure you were alright." replied Sweetie Belle.
"Why?" Spike asked.
"Beats me. Now let us lead you to Rarity's." said Sweetie Belle.  
"Ok then." Spike replied.
----
When they finally got to Rarity's, Spike realized something.
"I forgot to get her something!" he yelled.
"Don't worry, we got it covered." replied the CMC.
Just as they said that, Apple bloom pulled out a box of chocolates, and Scootaloo had some flowers.
"Wow, you guys are the best!" as Spike took the stuff. "But it looks like you don't have your cutie marks yet."
"Don't worry, we just wanted to help you first. Well, good luck Spike!" they all said.
As they were leaving though, Spike noticed that Apple Bloom seemed a little upset. But, he had to see Rarity before even worrying about that.
As he came up to the door and rang the doorbell, it was silent. Until he heard something.
"Who is it?" asked Rarity.
"It's me Spike milady." replied Spike, who was still nervous.
"Oh, I will be right there Spike." She replied.
"Ok milady!" Spike replied back.
----
After about 5 minutes, Rarity opened the door.
"Hi there Spike, sorry about the wait, just finishing my hair. What do you have there?" She asked.
"This, is for you Rarity." Spike said, handing it to her.
"Oh, Spike. You're such a gentleman." Rarity said as she gave him a kiss on the cheek.
Spike blushed and Rarity just giggled and also blushed a little bit.
"So Spike, do you want to help me a little bit, then, umm, go, to get dinner or something." Rarity said, blushing a little bit.
"Sure Rarity, that sounds like fun!" Spike said in a happy voice.
"Ok, well, we better get started here, I have an order to finish." replied Rarity.
"I am always willing to help the most beautiful thing in Ponyville." Spike said.
"Oh Spike, you're such a gentleman." Rarity replied blushing a little.
Then worked for a couple of hours and Rarity was extremely impressed with how hard Spike was working.
"Spike, you are doing such a good job! You are my favourite helper." Rarity complimented.
"I would do anything for you Rarity." Spike replied.
"Oh Spike, thank you. I think it's time for our little date. Oh, that reminds me, I better go and get changed. I will be right back Spike." Rarity said.
"Ok Rarity." Spike replied.
Spike stood there, waiting for Rarity, thinking about everything. He couldn't believe that he was going out with his biggest crush ever. Then all of a sudden, Rarity came out in her personal, favourite outfit. She looked, beautiful. Spike just stood there, unable to find any words to describe her.
"So, what do you think?" asked Rarity.
"You, look, soo, beautiful. But I don't have my suit here.
"Not to worry, I got this for you." as Rarity gave Spike a suit that looked just like his, only, a lot more fancy.
"Oh, thanks Rarity." replied Spike. "So, where do you plan on going?" asked Spike.
"To one of my favourite places"
To be continued...
Part 2: [link] I want to know what you think. This story is based off of this: [link]
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I like your characterization a lot. These are not easy characters to write for but you make them very believable as if they were straight from the show in some places. Except Twilight. I think she's a little too approving and the transitions need a little work, but overall, very very good. Thanks for sharing. It's always nice to see Rarity and Spike end up together :)